You are currently attending a course which is not the same as per the description in the admission brochure. Write a letter to the headmaster. In your letter, state which course you are enrolled in provide details about the noted differences suggest what actions would you like him to take

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Dear Headmaster, I hope

this

letter finds you in supreme health.I am writing regarding the

course

I've recently started. I am a fresh graduate and I wanted to utilise my holidays so I enrolled in your distinguished esthetic dentistry programme.

This

course

would not only allow me to acquire new aptitude but

also

be available at a reasonable price. Sir , I noticed striking differences in the

course

modules as compared to the description in the brochure.Evidently,hands-on practice is minimal and the

course

is theoretical.

Moreover

, tedious lectures fail to engage us and the learning is trivial.

Lastly

, infection control is the key component of our field and it hasn't been discussed yet. I request you to incorporate the practical component in the

course

so that it can bolster our confidence for future training.It will either allow us to overcome our shortcomings or learn new skills with extensive practice .As dentists, we should be competent and well-acquired to treat patients individually.I hope you will endorse my suggestions. Thank you in anticipation Your's Faithfully Ahmad Hassan Nadeem

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Topic Vocabulary:

Brochure discrepancies
Enrollment details
Description mismatch
Learning outcomes
Course modules
Expectations unmet
Instructor qualifications
Additional resources
Compensatory measures
Constructive feedback
Proactive solutions
Educational objectives
Resolution proposal
Amicable discussion
Immediate attention
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