The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012.

The line graph indicates the changing rates of crime in the inner city from 2003 to 2012 by

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of incidents.

Overall

,

burglary

was the highest in 2012, but

robbery

was the lowest.

Moreover

,

burglary

had

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plummeted from 2005 until 2008.

To begin

with 2003, the crime occurred by

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burglary

at 3500

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maximum point

while

robbery

was the lowest at 500.

Moreover

,

car

theft

was at 3000 which is lower than

burglary

by a few. Next 2 years,

burglary

had oscillated at 3000, but

car

theft

and

robbery

rose

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by a little. In 2006,

burglary

,

car

theft

, and

robbery

had declined

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500, 700, and 100 respectively.

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burglary

had plummeted to 1000

while

car

theft

fluctuated

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2000 and

robbery

was

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hit a low at 500 in 2008.

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every crime

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moved up especially

burglary

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increased to 1500 and had been

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until 2011 and it was reduced again in 2012.

Finally

,

robbery

and

car

theft

had

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oscillated and grew

in

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last

year at 600 and 2700 respectively.