An American writer think that tomorrow is more important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there is a wide range of American writer who holds the view that
tomorrow
is more important than the present.
This
essay disagrees with
this
point of view and I will analyze several main reasons behind my disagreement. First of all, If we only care about
tomorrow
instead
of
this
moment make a bad effect on the population's mental health. They put total expectations into
tomorrow
, close their hand and sincerely pray
tomorrow
will be better than today, they don't tend to make an effort to go over these tough issues in their daily life because of the reasons that they consider
tomorrow
to be more critical.
For example
, there is a huge figure of teenagers addicted to their phones, immersing themselves in a virtual world and reject take action to improve their quality of life more worthy, they should pay more attention at present and take concern for people nearby them, they will feel more cheerful because
tomorrow
is so far away.
Moreover
, thinking too much about the future does not bring a lot of benefits. Some people are not aware of what is wrong with their life if they just planning for the future, everything always
transform
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into another statement immediately, one thing we can hold and has the ability to rewrite is today.
In addition
, it is difficult to predict the future, so we should take more care in the present
such
as increasing our social skills, hanging out with friends and having dinner with parents and family.
To conclude
, I strongly believe that it will bring more profits if
proper
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focus is on now.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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