It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (eg. dinosaurs, dodos, etc.). There is no reason why people should stop this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?

Today, a variety of

wildlife

is dying out. Some

people

think we do not need to help those wild

animals

and maintain

this

condition.

However

, I disagree with that. On the one hand, those wild species becoming extinct is a natural process.

Firstly

, the natural environment

such

as

rainforest

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and habitats are polluted significantly, so

that

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the water, air and food quality are becoming worse and even toxic.

Thus

,

wildlife

cannot adapt to

live

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in

such

a worse environment and they are disappearing.

Secondly

, The lack of

foods

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food

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is the main reason for those

animals

dying out.

Human

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could do nothing to maintain the related creatures for wild

animals

,

expecially

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especially

for those unknown plants and insects.

On the other hand

,

Although

it is hard to help

wildlife

survival survive,

people

still can do

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things

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should take some actions to support them. As

the

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wildlife

extinction could cause many negative drawbacks for human

being

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. The first is financial losses.

In other words

, if

people

help

wildlife

to protect

natural

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their natural

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habitat, they will have more food resources and water to survive. It is helpful to maintain

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ecosystemand

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ecosystem and

benefical

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beneficial

for agriculture industries

，

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so that

people

can achieve the target production of crops and it is better for

local

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economy.

Furthermore

, helping

wildlife

survival

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is good for creature biodiversity. Some endangered

animals

like pandas, Asian elephants and cranes could bring many benefits

for

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human

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in scientific research and other fields. If they are dying out, the scientists and

our

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next generation only can see them in pictures or social media. In conclusion,

although

human

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humans

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cannot stop those wild

animals

disappearing

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from disappearing

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, I believe helping them

survival

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is

benefits

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for

people

. It is not only good for creature biodiversity but

also

can boost

local

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economy.