It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (eg. dinosaurs, dodos, etc.). There is no reason why people should stop this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?
Today, a variety of should take some actions to support them. As
wildlife
is dying out. Some Use synonyms
people
think we do not need to help those wild Use synonyms
animals
and maintain Use synonyms
this
condition. Linking Words
However
, I disagree with that.
On the one hand, those wild species becoming extinct is a natural process. Linking Words
Firstly
, the natural environment Linking Words
such
as Linking Words
rainforest
and habitats are polluted significantly, so Fix the agreement mistake
rainforests
that
the water, air and food quality are becoming worse and even toxic. Correct word choice
apply
Thus
, Linking Words
wildlife
cannot adapt to Use synonyms
live
in Wrong verb form
living
such
a worse environment and they are disappearing. Linking Words
Secondly
, The lack of Linking Words
foods
is the main reason for those Fix the agreement mistake
food
animals
dying out. Use synonyms
Human
could do nothing to maintain the related creatures for wild Fix the agreement mistake
Humans
animals
, Use synonyms
expecially
for those unknown plants and insects.
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especially
On the other hand
, Linking Words
Although
it is hard to help Linking Words
wildlife
survival survive, Use synonyms
people
still can do Use synonyms
less
thingsCorrect quantifier usage
apply
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and
the
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apply
wildlife
extinction could cause many negative drawbacks for human Use synonyms
being
. The first is financial losses. Fix the agreement mistake
beings
In other words
, if Linking Words
people
help Use synonyms
wildlife
to protect Use synonyms
natural
habitat, they will have more food resources and water to survive. It is helpful to maintain Correct pronoun usage
their natural
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the ecosystemand
ecosystemand
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ecosystem and
benefical
for agriculture industriesCorrect your spelling
beneficial
，
so that Remove the comma
apply
people
can achieve the target production of crops and it is better for Use synonyms
local
economy. Add an article
the local
Furthermore
, helping Linking Words
wildlife
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survival
is good for creature biodiversity. Some endangered Replace the word
survive
animals
like pandas, Asian elephants and cranes could bring many benefits Use synonyms
for
Change preposition
to
human
in scientific research and other fields. If they are dying out, the scientists and Fix the agreement mistake
humans
our
next generation only can see them in pictures or social media.
In conclusion, Change the word
the
although
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human
cannot stop those wild Fix the agreement mistake
humans
animals
Use synonyms
disappearing
, I believe helping them Change preposition
from disappearing
survival
is Replace the word
survive
benefits
for Replace the word
beneficial
people
. It is not only good for creature biodiversity but Use synonyms
also
can boost Linking Words
local
economy.Add an article
the local
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