Some children receive almost no encouragement from their parents regarding their performance at school while other children receive too much pressure from their over enthusiastic parents which can have a negative impact on the child. Why do you think some parents put too much pressure on their children to perform well at school? What do you think a role of a parent should be in their child education. Write at least 250 words.

Parents

have the responsibility for ensuring that their wards excel in school, they guide them throughout their educational ladder. Some guardians are soft on their little ones and do not push them to strive harder in the classroom

while

others who are strict and keen about

children

's education are said to affect them negatively. I believe

parents'

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have positive motives when

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their

children

to perform better for the betterment of the child's future because as a guardian, it is your duty to make sure your

children

make it in life. First of all, I think

children

from the beginning of preschool are not knowledgeable and experienced enough to know the consequences of

of

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not studying hard, all they know is, going to school is a thing human beings do just like eating so they

also

need to

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requirements. They have no idea about the need to get

good

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score

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so it is something that

parents

instill

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in the

children

at a tender age,

this

then

becomes a tradition and continues throughout their academic lives. If

parents

do not start

this

pressure treatment at that early age,

children

will not excel in class so

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this

this

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is one of the reasons why some adults force their young ones to perform exceedingly in the classroom. Despite

this

helping kids in

someway

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, it might have a bad effect on

children

as they may always feel frightened and intimidated by the kind of pressure on them.

This

is because

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some

instance

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, a mother can spank her kid because she or she didn't get

high

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mark or can even threaten not to do something for them because they didn't meet her target score. There are many roles to be played by

parents

in their

offsprings

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academics, they need to educate them on the importance of education.

For instance

,they can tell them about how they will become a doctor or a teacher in the future which will in the long run give them

some

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good salary to sustain their lives.

Also

, they have to act as role models for

children

as they observe and emulate what adults do, they themselves must excel in

the

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career and finances so that

children

will follow suit. Another role of

parents

in

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educational development is support and assistance. They can support

children

by paying school fees, providing all materials needed to enhance schooling and

also

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them any chance they get.

For example

, they can help

children

do homework and

also

do revisions with them when they are home.

To conclude

, I think

parents

shouldn't be

to

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hard on their

children

, different approaches can be used to help in a

child

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academic training.

Finally

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it is the duty of every parent to see to it that their

children

succeed in life.