Many people are moving from rural areas to big cities. Why has this happened? To what extent do you think it is a good trend?

There is a rising

trend

that

people

are migrating from rural areas to urban areas. Personally, I believe that it is a good

trend

, and my reasons will be given in the following essay. The reasons for

this

phenomenon to happen

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quite straightforward.

To begin

with, many

people

decide to move into

cities

, seeking for

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life. Big

cities

are densely populated and there are more job opportunities available, so migrants may earn more money,

thus

their living conditions will be significantly improved.

For example

, living in big

cities

enables migrants to seek

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jobs with higher salaries,

then

they are able to afford goods with better quality and have a better life. By

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contrast, employment opportunities are scarce and

people

living there have limited buying power,

due to

poverty.

Besides

, living

cities

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assure better health care. The highly-developed public transport system

such

as roads

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crucial for ambulances to reach the patients' positions, and

cities

have more hospitals

due to

the large population, leading to higher density.

As a result

, it is easier for city dwellers to maintain

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and enjoy

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faster medical support than those living in rural areas. From my perspective, it is definitely a positive

trend

for

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rural-to-urban migration. Because,

firstly

, the reduction

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rural population makes intensive farming available. Since intensive farming is

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up on the

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of a large amount of farming land, the more migration, the easier to start intensive farming, and

this

agricultural technology contributes to a significant rise in the

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of crops harvested, resulting in improved food production.

Moreover

, since

people

are moving into

cities

, the

cities

expand and start the urbanisation processes. More specifically, the population boom lead to the development of industry and other tertiary economies,

therefore

, the whole country will change from an agricultural one to an industrial one, attracting more investigations and contributing to the economy,

To sum up

, more job opportunities and better public services are the main factors that attract

people

to the metro. In my view, it will be a good

trend

.