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Success is often measured by wealth and material belongings. Do you think weath is the best measure of sucess? What makes a successfull person?

#success #wealth #belongings #weath #measure #sucess #successfull #person
The contemporary way of
thoughts
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distincts
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 that wealth and assets are the most
prominents
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prominent
 ways to measure the capability of a person to be successful, even though we can agree with that, those elements provide only a visible and objective point of view of how someone can be successful.
Moreover
,it is possible to measure
success
 in different areas
such
 as happiness and the feeling of accomplishment which correspond to the subjective and emotional perspective. Primarily, the idea of considering wealth as the first and most distinct proof of
success
 is the most common perspective from any individual
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 ultimately seeks
for
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success
.
Hence
 people see their neighbors acquiring the newest
Iphone
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iPhone
 or vehicle and they think “How rich and successful they are, I want to be like them”
therefore
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 they start working in order to bolster their current economic standing and purchase those equipment and technology in order to feel “wealthy”.
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 it occurs that people that showcase those material belongings and wealth don't feel happy or successful and they prefer to search for a more spiritual achievement in order to feel whole.
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, what makes an individual successful is the happiness and the feeling of accomplishment that he or she can achieve during his or her life. It is possible to observe professionals
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 lived in an old country house in their small town feeling whole as they accomplished everything that they needed. A
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 home and
a
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big family, those elements are not visible material belongings but
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emotional and sentimental value. In summation even though it is
clearly
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 to recognise the general conception of
success
 is shown with wealthnes and material belongings
but
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apart from that,
its
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also
 valuable for some individuals that
by
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reaching
success
 in other areas, usually aligned with accomplishment in their career, is the important avenue that will lead to
success
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multifaceted
  • personal fulfillment
  • gauging
  • criteria
  • financial stability
  • professional development
  • accomplishments
  • exert
  • legacy
  • striving
  • welfare
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