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cooking food at home is a waste of time and energy. do you agree or disagree

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Foods are the basic requirement for life.
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, some circle of people believe that homemade
meal
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 is wasting
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time
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 and consuming
much
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 energy
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 the fact that there are many restaurants with many
food
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 options one can go to without undergoing much stress. I really disagree with
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 statement for
a
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several reasons.
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first,
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making
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 at home is not a
wasting
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 of
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 and effort because people can prepare any
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 they like
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 considering their health. In
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, when cooking
meals
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 in the
house
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, the health of individuals is put into consideration and because of
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 fresh ingredients are used and necessary precautions are taken in order to deliver good quality
food
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 to the family. In
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house
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,
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, whenever I am cooking soup for the family, l often add a pinch of salt with plenty of onions without using monosodium
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L-glutamate
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 is
becaus
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because
 a number of my families are hypertensive and the medical instruction given to them by the doctor is to reduce their salt intake.
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 goes to show that the physical fitness of the family members is considered when preparing
food
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 in the
house
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.
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, when preparing
meals
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 at home, children can have the opportunity to learn about cooking.
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 means, they will stay in the kitchen with the chef when cooking is ongoing
,
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 so that they can learn and
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, increase their culinary skills.
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, I learn how to cook by spending quality
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 with my mother in the kitchen when she makes
meals
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.
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 is
therefore
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 evident that cooking in one's
house
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 is not wasting
a
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time
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 and energy-consuming. In conclusion, I am in disagreement that making
food
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 and
meals
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 in the
house
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 is a waste of
time
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 and effort.

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