cooking food at home is a waste of time and energy. do you agree or disagree

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Foods are the basic requirement for life.
However
, some circle of people believe that homemade
meal
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is wasting
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time
and consuming
much
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energy
due to
the fact that there are many restaurants with many
food
options one can go to without undergoing much stress. I really disagree with
this
statement for
a
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several reasons.
For
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first,
making
food
at home is not a
wasting
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of
time
and effort because people can prepare any
food
they like
while
considering their health. In
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, when cooking
meals
in the
house
, the health of individuals is put into consideration and because of
this
fresh ingredients are used and necessary precautions are taken in order to deliver good quality
food
to the family. In
house
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,
for example
, whenever I am cooking soup for the family, l often add a pinch of salt with plenty of onions without using monosodium
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L-glutamate
.
This
is
becaus
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because
a number of my families are hypertensive and the medical instruction given to them by the doctor is to reduce their salt intake.
This
goes to show that the physical fitness of the family members is considered when preparing
food
in the
house
.
Moreover
, when preparing
meals
at home, children can have the opportunity to learn about cooking.
Its
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means, they will stay in the kitchen with the chef when cooking is ongoing
,
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so that they can learn and
as a result
, increase their culinary skills.
For example
, I learn how to cook by spending quality
time
with my mother in the kitchen when she makes
meals
.
This
is
therefore
evident that cooking in one's
house
is not wasting
a
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time
and energy-consuming. In conclusion, I am in disagreement that making
food
and
meals
in the
house
is a waste of
time
and effort.
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