You have been asked to organise a special dinner to celebrate your company’s achievements this year. Write a letter to the restaurant you have chosen. In your letter say : * why you want to come to the restaurant and when * how many people will attend the dinner * what special requirements you have

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letter to book your restaurant for celebrating our company’s achievements from 6pm to 10pm on 1st August

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2023. I want to choose your restaurant because I heard a good comment from my cousin that the sound of the speaker in your place is really good. It’s really nice information because we need to use the speaker for karaoke, so I have to make sure that the sound is nice.

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, I would like to reserve 50 staff and 10 special guests.

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, I want to require a MC for that night, because we have some guests, and the MC will introduce and say something to them. We need to make sure that we will have a place for celebration.

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, I would be grateful if you could respond to me soon. Thank you in advance for your assistance with

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matter. Yours faithfully, Joseph Hien

yeshomeclassMon Jul 03 2023

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In formal writing, you should write I will and Can not.

Do not use exclamation mark in formal writing, but you can use it in informal writing.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

153 words

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The family has a great influence on children's development, but the influence from outside the home plays a bigger part in children's life. Do you agree or disagree?

An American film actor once said, "Tomorrow is important and precious" • Some people think individuals and society should pay more attention to the future than to the present. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people think that a good diet and exercise are not necessary for a healthy and long life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?