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The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table illustrates the forestry areas in divided countries in the world, measured by units of millions of
hectares
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 over 15 years (from 1990 to 2005).
Overall
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, different nations retain dissimilar forest land acreages, which fluctuate over time. Forest areas in
Europe
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 maintained an increase in the period.
This
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 country
also
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 has the highest woodland zone compared with the others. Unlike Oceania, a nation owned the lowest range of natural districts, in which forested land showed a downward trend over the same period. As is represented, in 1990, the forestry zone in
Europe
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 was the widest, accounting for 989
million
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hectares
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. The second-highest acreage of forested land belonged to South
America
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, with 946
million
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hectares
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. Other territories
such
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 as Africa, Asia, and North
America
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 possessed moderate amounts of natural habitats, respectively 749, 576, and 708
million
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hectares
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. In 2000,
although
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 there were changes during the time,
Europe
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's natural fields stayed unchanged as the highest (about 998
million
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hectares
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), slightly increased
in contrast
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 with the previous period.
While
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Europe
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 showed a rocketed trend, other countries
such
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 as Africa or North
America
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 seemingly decreased in the range of forestry fields, accounting for 709 and 705
million
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hectares
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, differentiated from the former years. Oceania was not an exception. Its bushland acreage tediously fell from 199 to 198
million
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hectares
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. Noticeably, there was a similar tendency in 2005, as
Europe
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’s woodland reached its peak at 1001
million
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hectares
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, the highest position over the term. Whilst other domestic areas illustrated a downfall in bushland fields, North
America
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 remained at 705
million
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hectares
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 in forest acreage over 10 years. Interestingly, the range of natural spaces in Oceania still steadily declined, from 198 to 197
million
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hectares
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words hectares, europe, million, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Hectares
  • Forested land
  • Regions
  • Distribution
  • Trends
  • Historical data
  • Deforestation
  • Urbanization
  • Outliers
  • Proportionately
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