Some people think that it is good for younger people to make their own decisions. Others feel that these decisions should be made with the help of their parents. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

While

some are in favour of encouraging young individuals to make their own calls to gain essential experience and be successful in the future, I tend to agree with those who argue that elderly

people

have obligations to assist their descendants to make the right

decisions

. On the one hand, there are some advantages for young

people

to make their own

decisions

, including the acquisition of crucial experience from making mistakes at an early age.

For instance

, young

people

who have stomachaches caused by consuming too much oily food will be more aware of their eating habits in later life.

Moreover

, children who are able to arrange their schedules by themselves are able to arrange their time based on individual characteristics,

such

as early birds tend to conduct difficult tasks in the morning

while

late owls have better performance during night time, which ensure the best school performance of them. On the other hand, I believe the suggestions from elderly

people

are crucial to deter young

people

from regretting their

decisions

. First of all, students who lack life experience should seek for pieces of advice from family members or teachers for

further

education since many graduates regret the faculties they chose back in the university which fail to help them to have a better career.

Secondly

, it is the obligation of parents to point out their mistakes which could cause profound influences in the future.

For instance

, many teenagers consider bullying on campuses as a way to gain respect from peers, whilst

such

behaviours could lead to mental and physical harm to victims. Educators and parents have the responsibility to stop them from making

such

choices

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the capacity of telling right from wrong. To summarise, there are pros and cons to allowing young individuals to make their own decision. Even though that it could help young

people

to be more independent and gain the capacity of time arrangement. I personally suggest that elderly

people

should be able to help their descendants to make

decisions

in certain situations.