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You have been living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently a new neighbour moved in and has been making a lot of noise, which disturbs you. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: explain the situation describe why it bothers you suggest a solution

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Dear Sir, I am Mangesh. living in your rented house for the past few years. I am writing to express my annoyance with the new neighbour who shifted recently to the apartment which you have rented to them. His is name John. We have met a few times. Though he is a student, his late-night party disturbs my sleep,
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 he litters the floor with his garbage
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 he plays loud music in the evening
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 smokes in the room which is not allowed, as told by you and he throws the cigarette buds near the window which makes the building ground dirty and it smell's a lot, many children play near the ground, which is will give them a negative effect on their life. Henceforth I would like you to take action against
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 kind of behaviour and give him possible solutions for the do's and don't. I would like you to tell him to behave properly. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Mangesh
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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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