The news media’s tendency to report problems and emergencies rather than positive development is harmful to individuals and the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Reporting problems and emergencies by the
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media's tendency has sparked a heated debate.
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I accept that
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trend influences positively individuals and society, I
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agree that it adversely impacts development. On the one hand, there are a couple of vital reasons why I agree that the
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media influences positively. First and foremost, the
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on emergencies can save
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's lives.
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, the media often reports the
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as reporting the
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that is
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about disasters
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as storms, and earthquakes quickly and correctly.
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,
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can get ready, prepare to deal, and
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keep safe right away.
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, thanks to
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reports on criminals and the law, they can be aware of illegal activities and avoid doing bad things.
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can play a role in education with everyone on the grounds that
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can blame criminals and teach
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how to protect themselves from crime.
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, I am convinced that the
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on problems adversely impacts individuals and society.
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, the detailed description of crimes can help criminals as a source of training to break the law. In condition, the
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on the Internet may be exaggerated in the light of Internet's lack of strict control.
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leads to making many
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bewildered, and confused when they receive information.
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the
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on emergencies has more benefits, it seems to me that it has a remarkably harmful impact on individuals and society.
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