The table below compares the income of secondary and high school teachers in five particular countries : Australia, Denmark, Luxembourg, Japan and Korea in 2009.
The table below compares the
income
of secondary and high school teachers
in five particular countries : Australia
, Denmark
, Luxembourg
, Japan
and Korea
in 2009.
Overall
, the salary
rate
in these five nations observed an upward trend over the period of 15 years
. While
Luxembourg
teachers
earned the highest income
, this
figure for Australia
accounted for the lowest number.
In the starting stage, teachers
from Australia
and Denmark
were paid 28,000 and 45,000 respectively. After 15-year experience, Australian lecturers could achieve the maximum salary
rate
(48,000) and took nine years
to reach the top salary
. Meanwhile, the income
of Denmark
teachers
began at 45,000 and increased steadily by 9,000 in the next 15 years
. Eight years
are adequate for teachers
from Denmark
to get the top salary
.
The salary
rate
of teachers
from Luxembourg
started at 80,000 followed by two countries from Asia : Japan
and Korea
, at 34,000 and 30,000 respectively. After 15 years
, teachers
' income
in Luxembourg
increased sharply to 119,000 and this
figure for Japan
and Korea
also
witnessed a rapid growth of 31,000 and 18,000 respectively. While
Australia
and Denmark
took less than 10 years
to reach the top salary
, these three countries spent more than 30 years
to achieve the top rate
(Luxembourg
with 30 years
, Japan
with 37 years
and Korea
with 34 years
).Submitted by joyce.ta213 on
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