The table compares the salaries of teachers in secondary and high schools in five countries in 2009.

The table compares the salaries of teachers in secondary and high schools in five countries in 2009.
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The table compares the salaries of
teachers
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in secondary and high schools in five countries in 2009.
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, teacher salaries have increased after 15
years
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in all five regions. It can be seen that the
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of
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in Luxembourg is higher than
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other four regions,
while
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teachers
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in
Australia
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are paid the lowest. In
Luxembourg
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the starting
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for
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is 80000 which is much higher than in other countries.
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in
Australia
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are paid 45000 for the starting level. Meanwhile,
teachers
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in the rest of the world have a starting
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of about 30,000. After 15
years
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of experience,
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in Luxembourg are paid 132,000 a year,
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in Denmark and Japan receive salaries of 54,000 and 65,000 respectively. The same level of experience but
teachers
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only get 48,000 for a year working in
Australia
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and Korea. It is worth mentioning that it takes
teachers
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in Denmark only 8
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to reach the maximum
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, in
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Australia
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it takes 9
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.
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in other countries it takes more than 30
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, especially for
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in Japan it takes 37
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