The table compares the salaries of teachers in secondary and high schools in five countries in 2009.

The table compares the salaries of teachers in secondary and high schools in five countries in 2009.
The table compares the salaries of
teachers
in secondary and high schools in five countries in 2009.
Overall
, teacher salaries have increased after 15
years
in all five regions. It can be seen that the
salary
of
teachers
in Luxembourg is higher than
the
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other four regions,
while
teachers
in
Australia
are paid the lowest. In
Luxembourg
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the starting
salary
for
teachers
is 80000 which is much higher than in other countries.
Teachers
in
Australia
are paid 45000 for the starting level. Meanwhile,
teachers
in the rest of the world have a starting
salary
of about 30,000. After 15
years
of experience,
teachers
in Luxembourg are paid 132,000 a year,
while
teachers
in Denmark and Japan receive salaries of 54,000 and 65,000 respectively. The same level of experience but
teachers
only get 48,000 for a year working in
Australia
and Korea. It is worth mentioning that it takes
teachers
in Denmark only 8
years
to reach the maximum
salary
, in
Australia
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it takes 9
years
.
While
in other countries it takes more than 30
years
, especially for
teachers
in Japan it takes 37
years
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