The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.
The table illustrates data about the underground railway systems in six megapolises
such
as London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto, and Los Angeles.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the earliest metro station was opened in London (1863) and this
city has also
the highest number of kilometres of the route (394 km). Also
, the newest underground subway system was opened in Los Angeles in 2001.
According to
the table, Tokyo metro systems commuted far more passengers per year than in another capital city - Washington DC. However
, comparing this
two metropolises by kilometres of route, Tokyo has slightly more routes than Washington DC.
It is interesting to note that Kyoto, the second capital of Japan, has the minimum number of kilometres of route and commuted passengers per year compared with other cities.Correct determiner usage
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