The graph below shows the information on waste disposal in a European country from 2005 to 2008.
The given line graph gives information about eliminating rubbish in Europe over a period of 3 years.
It is clear that
during 3 years occurrence many changes.
In 2005 the peak-up category had been landfill with about 2000 Linking Words
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