The graph below shows the information on waste disposal in a European country from 2005 to 2008.
The given line graph gives information about eliminating rubbish in Europe over a period of 3 years.
It is clear that
during 3 years occurrence many changes.
In 2005 the peak-up category had been landfill with about 2000 million
tonnes
. But this
figure by 2006 and 2008 considerably declined by 1600 million
tonnes
and 1200 million
tonnes
respectively. Burning showed the least proportion in 2005, at 900 million
tonnes
. By contrast
, by 2006 this
figure was significantly higher consisting of 1200 million
tonnes
. In 2008 again returned to the as a first year. Dumping in the sea showed an average proportion, accounting for 1200 million
tonnes
. However
, by 2006 and 2008 this
figure saw a big rise, with just above 1400 and just above 1600 respectively.Submitted by ieltsteaching0 on
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