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In many countries, plastic containers have become more common than ever and are even used by many food and drink companies. Do you think advantages outweighs the disadvantages?

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The earth suffers from various problems out of which issues with the utilisation and disposal of
plastic
 waste are the most alarming. These days, using
plastic
 containers for the storage of edibles has gained significant popularity in the food and beverage companies in several Nations. I believe the demerits of
plastic
 are definitely greater than the merits. Beyond doubt,
plastic
 being a non-biodegradable substance causes a maximum environmental hazard.
This
 is because it floats on water and does not allow atmospheric oxygen to dissolve into the water.
Thus
, starving aquatic life of oxygen.
For example
, fish from several ponds and rivers have died
due to
 the logging of
plastic
.
Besides
this
 stray animals eat the leftover food from the
plastic
 bags which might get choked in their throat.
As a result
 of
this
 numerous stray dogs and cats in India lose their lives.
Hence
,
plastic
 not only damages marine life but
also
 terrestrial life.
Further
, burning these
plastic
 containers in the open contributes to air pollution.
This
 is one of the major reasons for the degrading air quality index in major cities like Delhi and Bangalore.
On the other hand
, a host of people argue
had
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that
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plastic
 is both cheap and readily available and
therefore
 well-liked by developing countries.
For instance
, most South Asian countries are using huge amounts of
plastic
 in various everyday processes.
Apart from
this
,
plastic
 containers keep food and drink away from moisture
as well as
 humidity.
Thus
, safeguarding them from getting brittle and soft.
For example
, cookies are often placed in airtight
plastic
 boxes to preserve them from moisture.
To conclude
, we can say that despite the easy availability and low cost of
plastic
 its production and consumption should be decreased to protect the ecosystem and wildlife.
Therefore
, the advantages of
plastic
 can never outweigh the disadvantages.
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