It has been suggested that cars and public transport should be banned from city centres and only bicycles be allowed instead. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
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instead
of private vehicles or public transport, bicycle
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bicycles
this
statement because the use of bicycles has its limitation and it may deteriorate people’s quality of life
as well.
There are too many unavoidable restrictions of using bicycles such
as extreme weather and poor physical condition of individuals. For example
, for those who live in Canada, it is impossible to force them to commute by cycle during the winter where
the temperature may be lower than -20°C. Correct word choice
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, since taking bicycle
relies on people’s body condition, if Correct article usage
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such
suggestion
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physical discrimination during the selection phase.
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districts
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For instance
, many graduates tend to live in the periphery of Paris because they can obtain as many job opportunities as those live
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centre
while
they only need to pay half for their daily life
. On the contrary
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city
but endure higher financial pressure. No matter what choice they make, their living level would reduce.
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