It has been suggested that cars and public transport should be banned from city centres and only bicycles be allowed instead. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that
instead
of private vehicles or public transport,
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should be the unique available moving way in city centres. I completely disagree with
this
statement because the use of bicycles has its limitation and it may deteriorate people’s quality of
life
as well. There are too many unavoidable restrictions of using bicycles
such
as extreme weather and poor physical condition of individuals.
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, for those who live in Canada, it is impossible to force them to commute by cycle during the winter
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the temperature may be lower than -20°C.
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, since taking
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relies on people’s body condition, if
such
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was adopted, it would impede handicapped persons from
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market and result in
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physical discrimination during the selection phase. Limiting the way of transportation only
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bike
also
hinders people from
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better
life
. Private cars or public transport like
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and
metro
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allow those who cannot afford the house price in urban to live in
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district
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while
they still can access easily
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their workplace or public services after a quick shuttle.
For instance
, many graduates tend to live in the periphery of Paris because they can obtain as many job opportunities as those
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in the
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while
they only need to pay half for their daily
life
.
On the contrary
, if
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was the only traffic choice, they could either sacrifice their
life
convenience to exchange
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affordable living in
suburbs
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or
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have to transfer to
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of
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but endure higher financial pressure. No matter what choice they make, their living level would reduce. In conclusion,
as well as
bicycles, it is necessary to let
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or
bus
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buses
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be used in city centres because the
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conditions of
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the bike
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bike
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bikes
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are quite limited, and without
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support from other transportation, people’s living
standard
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standards
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would decline.
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