Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome culture differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Travelling and experiencing new cultures is a luxury. There is an ongoing debate on whether

visitors

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should respect and follow local customs and behaviours or whether the hosting country should welcome foreigners and their cultural differences.

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essay will discuss

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views and my opinion as to why I agree with

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statements.

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, certain counties work hard at preserving their heritage.

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disrespecting

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would cause outrage,

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, disrupting natural habitats with items that cause harm like setting up fires or leaving plastic waste results in the peace of the area being ruined.

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true for local interactions as not keeping noise down or not speaking in a respectful way will upset communities so much that they no longer allow

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On the other hand

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, not all visiting people will all be educated in the customs of local residents. Because of

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, the public in the host country should provide education so that

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can have an authentic experience and gain wisdom.

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will allow positive feedback, so more travellers would want to visit. Members of the public might

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never get the chance to travel so an exchange of cultures would allow them to enrichen their minds.

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, when I travelled to Somalia I learned a lot about Somali customs and I

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was able to inform them about English culture. We all learnt something new leaving us all satisfied.

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, I agree with

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points as respect and education can be balanced where

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parties are happy.

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