Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Is this a positive or a negative step?

In the past, whenever an individual was sick, he/she would visit a doctor for a checkup. Recently, some citizens want to replace that traditional way with a self-care solution and they prefer to utilize medicines

instead

of meeting an educated person.

While

doing

this

may benefit them financially, I strongly believe that

this

is a negative step, which can lead to many problems. Obviously, people have limited knowledge about illness and how to face health issues.

Therefore

if they blindly cure themselves it could cause many unavoidable consequences.

Firstly

,

this

can increase the amount of pain they already have. Sadly, many companies produce fake and unhealthy items, which if people buy without knowing the side effects could

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the sickness becoming even worse.

For instance

, sometimes there are heart-related tablets used by patients who

also

have hair loss.

As a result

of that those who took those medicines would lose all their hair.

Furthermore

, a huge number of the population die annually because of consuming a couple of pills which were not suitable for their specific problem. So, ignoring professional help and relying on our limited brain can affect our health negatively.

In addition

,

this

replacement can

also

change the structure of society considerably.

Although

patients would have to pay less if they choose a self-care method rather than asking for professional help,

this

causes many

doctors

to become jobless. Hospitals are working and paying their staff until there are patients. So, when no one wants to enter a healthcare organization, those buildings have to close because they do not earn money.

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the

doctors

who went through many struggles and studied for a long time to give service to humans will have no possibility to stay in hospitals and work.

Thus

, one of the most important sectors of the country will stop giving aid.

Moreover

, society will lack academically well-prepared pupils.

That is

why skipping visiting

doctors

in order to heal our

illness

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might modify a country as

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and be harmful

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citizens. In conclusion,

while

there are many individuals who are convinced that with no

doctor

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a country can function well, I think that

this

has many disadvantages

such

as increasing the number of diseases and making

doctors

jobless.

Hence

,

this

is a negative step.