Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Is this a positive or a negative step?

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In the past, whenever an individual was sick, he/she would visit a doctor for a checkup. Recently, some citizens want to replace that traditional way with a self-care solution and they prefer to utilize medicines
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of meeting an educated person.
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doing
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may benefit them financially, I strongly believe that
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is a negative step, which can lead to many problems. Obviously, people have limited knowledge about illness and how to face health issues.
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if they blindly cure themselves it could cause many unavoidable consequences.
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,
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can increase the amount of pain they already have. Sadly, many companies produce fake and unhealthy items, which if people buy without knowing the side effects could
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the sickness becoming even worse.
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, sometimes there are heart-related tablets used by patients who
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have hair loss.
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of that those who took those medicines would lose all their hair.
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, a huge number of the population die annually because of consuming a couple of pills which were not suitable for their specific problem. So, ignoring professional help and relying on our limited brain can affect our health negatively.
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replacement can
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change the structure of society considerably.
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patients would have to pay less if they choose a self-care method rather than asking for professional help,
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causes many
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to become jobless. Hospitals are working and paying their staff until there are patients. So, when no one wants to enter a healthcare organization, those buildings have to close because they do not earn money.
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the
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who went through many struggles and studied for a long time to give service to humans will have no possibility to stay in hospitals and work.
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, one of the most important sectors of the country will stop giving aid.
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, society will lack academically well-prepared pupils.
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why skipping visiting
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in order to heal our
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might modify a country as
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and be harmful
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citizens. In conclusion,
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there are many individuals who are convinced that with no
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a country can function well, I think that
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has many disadvantages
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as increasing the number of diseases and making
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jobless.
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,
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is a negative step.
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