The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
The diagram depicts a current countenance of a public library and how it was in two decades earlier.
Overall
, a number of renovations were completed before getting its new appearance.
20 years ago, a seating arrangement with tables and chairs was in the middle whereas
fiction and non-fiction books
for adults were on the left and right side respectively. Moreover
, an enquiry desk was placed on the southeast side while
a reading was on the southwest corner. Additionally
, two rooms, one at the right top corner were used to place books
for children where latter one for keeping CDs, videos and computer games.
On the other hand
, two decades later, the sitting area
was removed though a few sofas were placed along with
an area
for children's books
and storytelling events.
The reading area
is superseded by a computer room, however
a cafe took the place of the previously used entry desk.Interestingly all the non-fiction Add a comma
,however
books
were eliminated and the ground was renovated with an information desk, self-service machines and fiction books
for the senior citizens. Finally
, the area
for adult fiction books
was made the place for reference books
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