The government investments in art ,music and theatre is a waste of money . Government should invest these funds in public services instead . What extent do you agree or disagree .
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government
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apply
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is why often people argued that authorities must Correct pronoun usage
which
used
that Change the verb form
use
money
on different sectors like health care , education and many other public work . Personally ,I agree with this
statement and in this
essay
I will briefly explain it .
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a number
the number
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about
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the
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the majority
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dying
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cost of private Correct article usage
the high
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.Correct your spelling
hospital
hospitals
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in my nation private hospitals are not come under every class family
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of family
hence
some are unable to take proper treatment ,at
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and at
leat
they died Correct your spelling
least
while
fighting with their diseas
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diseases
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, country
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the country
owner
have to invest their Fix the agreement mistake
owners
money
on
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in
the
public health to save their Correct article usage
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citizen
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citizens
lifes
.
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lives
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environment
problem like pollution and transport system Replace the word
environmental
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,first and foremost , authorities ought to do Correct your spelling
issues
investment
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solving global warming since personal vehicles are rising in Change preposition
in
the
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apply
harm
the Change the verb form
harms
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layer and finish the natural resources because fuel Correct your spelling
ozone
are
made Change the verb form
is
uo
of coal and other natural material . To reduce Correct your spelling
up
this
government
have to increase the prise
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price
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giving
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on Correct your spelling
vehicles
the
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installment
. Change the spelling
instalment
Moreover
, they have to enought
the people to used Correct your spelling
enough
goverment
transport ,Correct your spelling
government
thus
this
can also
reduce the traffic conjustion
,save Correct your spelling
congestion
atomsphere
, and natural products as well .
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although
government
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the government
nonetheless
I think government
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and invest on
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apply
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things like they can handle their Correct your spelling
useful
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this
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