The three pie charts show the changes in annual spending by a particular school in 1981, 1991, and 2001.
The given pie charts provide information about the yearly expenditures of a UK school in three different years 1981,1991 and 2001.
Overall
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it is clear that
the Linking Words
spendings
on salaries were the highest every year, Use synonyms
whereas
the Linking Words
spendings
on insurance were the lowest.
Use synonyms
According to
the graph, Linking Words
this
Linking Words
school
expenditures in 1981,1991 and 2001 in terms of wages of teachers were 40%, 50% and 45% respectively. Change noun form
school's
In addition
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this
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Correct article usage
the proportions
proportions
of money spent on insurance didn't Fix the agreement mistake
proportion
exceeded
10% in any year, reaching 8% in 2001. Change the verb form
exceed
Moreover
, the Linking Words
expenditures
on learning resources, Fix the agreement mistake
expenditure
such
as dictionaries and books was 15% in 1981. After which, the figure peaked at 20% and dropped dramatically to 9% in 2001. Regarding annual Linking Words
Use synonyms
spendings
on other Fix the agreement mistake
spending
staffs'
salaries, the figure decreased gradually over the period and plumbed in 2001 with 15% Change noun form
staff's
money
spent on Change preposition
of money
paychecks
of these people.
Correct article usage
the paychecks
Furthermore
, the statistics of Linking Words
Use synonyms
spendings
on both equipment and furniture fluctuated and reached 23% in 2001.Fix the agreement mistake
spending
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Vocabulary: Replace the words spendings with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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