Some people believe that having sport in schools is a waste of time and resources, whilst other people believe that sport in schools is a vital part of education.

Nowadays some

peole

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people

think that having

sport

as a

subject

to study is a waste of money and time,

while

others argue that

sport

plays a significant role in

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of pupils.

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i

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agree with

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statement because

this

subject

helps

students

to refresh their minds and do some physical activities.

This

essay will discuss both statements and explain my opinion. First of all, it is

well-known

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fact that

sport

is one of the keys to

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a healthy lifestyle regardless of how old people are and has many other benefits. Not surprisingly, most

of

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schools

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the schools

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today have

PE

as a

subject

to make

students

more forceful and increase their endurance as they are busy with studies and have no leisure time to do some

excersizes

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exercises

.

Furthermore

during

this

lection pupils can get unwind and refresh their heads after being concentrated on other

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lections.

Moreover

,

students

can learn more about sports which gives them

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to decide whether they will

be

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work in

this

area or understand how important for their life doing some activities can be.

In addition

, it

also

is obvious that

sport

is a

subject

that teaches pupils discipline. On

other

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hand, having

PE

in schools has disadvantages.

For instance

, to purchase a uniform parents of children need to offer it, find a size that suits

on

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their children and

finally

spend

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money or cancel their offer if their children would not like it. Despite

this

, relying on some

graduaters

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graduates

graduate

having

this

lection on

highter

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higher

grades makes some problems because

instead

of preparing for their final exams they do

excersizes

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exercises

at

PE

wasting their free time. They believe that

sport

is not as important as other lections and

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themselves why they must

to

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wear a special outfit as they do not do anything

cruicial

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crucial

and they do not pass any exam or test on

this

subject

.

Therefore

, some

indivials

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individuals

are arguing about

this

topic as they do not understand the role of

sport

playing in their life. In conclusion,

i

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strongly believe that everyone in

this

world should do some physical

activites

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activities

activity

whether where they are. I

also

support that all

students

should have

PE

in their educational centre because it really benefits

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them, their education and their life.