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The chart below gives information about species used for animal testing in the U.S. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about species used for animal testing in the U.S. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the different species utilized for animal testing in the United States. Animals used are
rabbits
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, hamsters, dogs, pigs, primates like monkeys and human beings, and sheep.
To begin
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 with,
rabbits
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 are one of the most commonly used animals out of all accounting for 38.7 per
cent
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. Hamsters stands at the second position for the testing which is 27.7 per
cent
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.
Furthermore
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, the use of dogs in the trials is 10.2 per
cent
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whereas
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 pigs make up 9.3 per
cent
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 of
that is
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 being involved in testing. Primates
such
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 as chimpanzees and monkeys contribute 9 per
cent
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 towards the test. About 5 per
cent
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 of sheep is used in The United States for experiments.
To conclude
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, it can be noted that
rabbits
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 are widely utilized for testing purposes
in contrast
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 to sheep which is the lowest. Primates, pigs and dogs have almost the same percentage as compared to hamsters and
rabbits
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words rabbits, cent with synonyms.
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