The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph gives descriptions of changes in the number of
visitors
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to three attractions in a European country from 1987 to 2007. As can be seen from the graph, all sites received a significant increase over the years with the
coast
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having the most
tourists
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.
In addition
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,
while
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the mountains experienced a more humble growth than others, it was the
lakes
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that witnessed the most changes over the period. To commence with, in 1987, 40,000
tourists
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visited the
coast
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, which was four times that of the
lakes
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. Following the next 5 years, the two figures diverged with the
coast
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’s
visitors
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slightly declining to around 35,000
whereas
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the
lakes
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increased to roughly 25,000. In 2002, both attractions witnessed a substantial surge when the
coast
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received more than 60,000
visitors
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and the
lakes
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reached a high of over 70,000. By the end of the period, the
coast
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surpassed the
lakes
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and ended at approximately 75,000
tourists
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while
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the
lakes
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decreased sharply to 50,000
visitors
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. Regarding
tourists
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in the mountains, 20,000 people went there in 1987 before the figure rose slowly and reached a plateau of 30,000 between 1997 and 2002. 5 years later, there were more
visitors
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coming to
this
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site through quite marginal, which made the mountains receive roughly 32,000
tourists
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by the end of the time span.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, coast, tourists, lakes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Significant
  • Trends
  • Comparative analysis
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Steady
  • Surge
  • Plummet
  • Consistency
  • Highlight
  • Reinforce
  • Data representation
  • Time frame
  • Subject matter
  • Overseas visitors
  • Tourism promotion
  • Transportation
  • Accommodation facilities
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