The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Though there are some contrasting voices, some people advocate that the development of mankind should be the prime goal of
science
. In my view, I completely agree with Use synonyms
this
view as it already brought a notion that without the help of it, we were unable to reach our desired destinations.
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To begin
with, the advancement of Linking Words
science
facilitates the invention of medicines and treatments for many diseases and makes lives longer and Use synonyms
healthy
. Replace the word
healthier
For example
, Black Fever took a lot of lives throughout the world over the Linking Words
last
century, but the formulation and development of vaccines eradicated Linking Words
this
serious illness. Linking Words
Moreover
, Linking Words
science
Use synonyms
also
made communication very easy and convenient so that we can save valuable time and money. Linking Words
while
the invention of the wheel gave humanity speed, the introduction of the steam engine and electricity Linking Words
fasten
the transportation system.
Another point is that Wrong verb form
fastened
science
helps to broaden our mentality and induce a concern over environmental damage. Since a lot of research Use synonyms
had been
proven that a good range of activities are exacerbating the planet's environment and suggested a way out from it, without the help of Wrong verb form
has
science
it was not achievable. Use synonyms
Last
but not the list, Linking Words
science
made agriculture and production easy taking not only the soil conditions into consideration but Use synonyms
also
the producing tools and other pesticides. In Madaripur, Linking Words
for example
, a group of scientists developed compost fertilizer for the salt-infected soil to produce paddy and other crops.
In conclusion, though few detrimental things had developed by Linking Words
science
for the earth, we can say these were outweighed by the benefits it brought and it is expected that more positive aspects will be added in the future.Use synonyms
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