The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Though there are some contrasting voices, some people advocate that the development of mankind should be the prime goal of
science
. In my view, I completely agree with this
view as it already brought a notion that without the help of it, we were unable to reach our desired destinations.
To begin
with, the advancement of science
facilitates the invention of medicines and treatments for many diseases and makes lives longer and healthy
. Replace the word
healthier
For example
, Black Fever took a lot of lives throughout the world over the last
century, but the formulation and development of vaccines eradicated this
serious illness. Moreover
, science
also
made communication very easy and convenient so that we can save valuable time and money. while
the invention of the wheel gave humanity speed, the introduction of the steam engine and electricity fasten
the transportation system.
Another point is that Wrong verb form
fastened
science
helps to broaden our mentality and induce a concern over environmental damage. Since a lot of research had been
proven that a good range of activities are exacerbating the planet's environment and suggested a way out from it, without the help of Wrong verb form
has
science
it was not achievable. Last
but not the list, science
made agriculture and production easy taking not only the soil conditions into consideration but also
the producing tools and other pesticides. In Madaripur, for example
, a group of scientists developed compost fertilizer for the salt-infected soil to produce paddy and other crops.
In conclusion, though few detrimental things had developed by science
for the earth, we can say these were outweighed by the benefits it brought and it is expected that more positive aspects will be added in the future.Submitted by mostafiz.rahman.cse on
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