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Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#someone #luck
It is argued that one’s success in life is mostly a matter of fortune. From my perspective, I do not totally agree with the statement
due to
 the fact that a person’s achievements are not only based on luck but
also
other
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 factors.
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 following essay will discuss my point of view On the one hand, luck plays an integral role in one’s accomplishment.
Initially
, fortune set up a concrete foundation.
For instance
, people who
born
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in
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a
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wealthy family is able to access high-class education systems and
a
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sufficient healthcare service, creating
favorable
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 conditions to achieve significant milestones.
In addition
,
elite
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 class always have advantages in many disadvantageous situations.
As a result
,
such
 persons always have superior opportunities to reach high status.
On the other hand
, there are many other factors
contribute
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 to a person’s career
such
 as dedication, persistence, determination and
endeavor
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.
This
 situation can manifest itself through the fact that, Charlie Chaplin, a famous comedian in
20th
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 century, who born in poverty and lost his father at a very young age. In spite of extremely
unfavorable
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unfavourable
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 conditions, he
then
 struggled with challenges and became excessively successful in his midlife.
Thus
, being successful can be true
to
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for
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 all if they make enough effort in their life. In conclusion,
beside
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luck
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the luck
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factor
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 there are a multiple
number of
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other aspects
contribute
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that contribute
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 to people’s accomplishments. Success requires more than that of being fortunate.
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