The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart represents the proportion of international
tourists
from four distinct sectors to Australia
, while
the presented table provides information about the average length of stay, accommodation, and main activity of those international visitors
. Overall
, it can be clearly seen from the pie chart that tourists
from Asia present the biggest number among the other categories.
According to
the chart, the number of Asian visitors
who travel to Australia
accounts for 37%. Furthermore
, there are just above a third of Europe tourists
visited Australia
at that time. In addition
, the proportion of the US shows nearly a half compared to Asia, while
individuals from other regions display the least percentage among other regions, at only a tenth.
From the table, the European tourists
display the longest stay in Australia
, at 16 days, while
, the shortest trip accounted for Asian visitors
, at only a week. In terms of accommodation, European and other region people prefer to live in a camp or caravan during their trip to Australia
. On the other hand
, Asian and American tourists
choose to stay in a 5-star hotel and a 4-star hotel respectively. In addition
, Sightseeing becomes the most popular activity of guests from Asia and America. Moreover
, while
European tourists
love to swim/sunbathe in Australia
, visitors
from other zones like to do surfing as a main activity.Submitted by andrisuryocahyono on
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