The table below shows information and prediction regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.
The table shows data about the UK from 1988 to 2030. It is evident that all 3
percentage
of population
aged 65 and above in Add an article
the population
Canda
, Germany, andCorrect your spelling
Canada
Correct article usage
the
country
will only Change to a plural noun
countries
increase
in population
aged 65 and older as the year goes by.
To begin
, Germany have
the highest Change the verb form
has
percentage
of 65 years old and above population
coming in at 20% and UK
Correct article usage
the UK
being
the lowest at 14% in 1988. Wrong verb form
is
However
, the population
percentage
of 65+ years old of
every country in the table will see an Change preposition
in
increase
in percentage
. With the data collected, we will be seeing an even more increase
in population
that are 65 and above by 5% by 2030.
Though, from 1988 to 2000 Uk have the lowest Correct article usage
the population
increase
in 65+
years old Correct article usage
the 65+
population
at only 1
% Correct article usage
a 1
increase
compare
to Canada and Germany which increasedWrong verb form
compared
5
%.Change preposition
by 5
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