The chart shows the average life expectancy for males and females in 1900, 1950 and 1990.
The table below illustrates the average
life
expectancy
for males and females of
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in
Austria
, Belgium, Denmark, Germany, and Sweden
in 1900, 1950, and 1990. From the data
we can see that the average Add a comma
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life
expectancy
of both male
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males
female
will increase as the year goes forward with females having the highest Fix the agreement mistake
females
life
expectancy
than males.
To begin
, Austria
's male
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males
female
have the lowest Fix the agreement mistake
females
life
expectancy
in comparison with all the other countries in 1900 and 1950. On the other hand
, Austria
's men and women have the second highest average life
expectancy
coming below Sweden
at 73.5 years old for men and 80.4 for women.
In contrast
, Sweden
have the highest average life
expectancy
for both male
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males
female
in 1900, 1950, and 1990. Fix the agreement mistake
females
However
, Austria
's male
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males
female
have the highest increase in Fix the agreement mistake
females
life
span compared to sweden
but do not have Change the capitalization
Sweden
life
span as high as Add an article
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sweden
.Change the capitalization
Sweden
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