The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meats in a European country between 1979 and 2004

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meats in a European country between 1979 and 2004
The line graph illustrates the consumption of
fish
and various types of meats including chicken, beef, and lamb, which were consumed in a European nation from 1979 to 2004.
Overall
, it is evident that
while
the consumption of
fish
experience an upward trend over the period, a reverse pattern could be observed in the figures for other types of meats. In 1979, the amount of beef which was consumed was the highest, at around 220
grams
. the figures for lamb and chicken were lower, at about 140
grams
and exactly 150
grams
, respectively.
However
,
fish
accounted for the lowest, at only about 60
grams
. In the period between 1979 and 2004, there was a fluctuating increase in the consumption of chicken to 250
grams
in 2004. After reaching a peak of around 240
grams
, the data on beef fell dramatically to a low of 100
grams
in 2004. the country
also
witnessed a steady decrease in the figure for
fish
to roughly 50
grams
at the end
of the period, and
this
number was lower than that for lamb, at around 60
grams
.
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