Some think that governments should support retired people financially while others believe theyshould take care of themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Few
people
believe that government
should help retired seniors financially and some say that they should be financially independent than depending on the government
. In my opinion, the government
should do their part of the fund for the retired people
and they need to be financially independent for a safety purpose.
One of the major reason, why government
need to support senior people
is because of their sacrifice towards the nation. For instance
: Military people
have spent most of their life span to safeguard the nation and people
, sometimes in war they even tend to lose one of their body parts and the level of risk they take is typically higher. So in , the future
government
should fund them to sustain them for the rest of their life. In addition
, to live independently than being a burden for family members as well. Although
, this
view is acceptable in many ways the other side's view should also
be taken into consideration.
In today’s scenario, government
is economically unstable and to develop it , they need to cut off a few expenses like retirement funds. So that they can focus on current employees' salaries instead
of caring for ex-employees. Despite this
fact, by reducing this
scheme they can provide additional employment as well which will make an impact on our economic growth. Likewise
, people
should always be independent in order to face the sudden consequences because there is no guarantee in this
policy, they can even stop it in future
. So for safety Fix the agreement mistake
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people
should always invest their money while
earning to have a peaceful life in future
.
To conclude
, I believe retired people
should invest their money while
in active working periods so that they can be independent in future
and the government
should financially support retired people
for their sustaining.Submitted by sowmya madhavan on
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