Some think that governments should support retired people financially while others believe theyshould take care of themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Few
people
believe that
government
should help retired seniors financially and some say that they should be financially independent than depending on the
government
. In my opinion, the
government
should do their part of the fund for the retired
people
and they need to be financially independent for a safety purpose. One of the major reason, why
government
need to support senior
people
is because of their sacrifice towards the nation.
For instance
: Military
people
have spent most of their life span to safeguard the nation and
people
, sometimes in war they even tend to lose one of their body parts and the level of risk they take is typically higher. So in , the
future
government
should fund them to sustain them for the rest of their life.
In addition
, to live independently than being a burden for family members as well.
Although
,
this
view is acceptable in many ways the other side's view should
also
be taken into consideration. In today’s scenario,
government
is economically unstable and to develop it , they need to cut off a few expenses like retirement funds. So that they can focus on current employees' salaries
instead
of caring for ex-employees. Despite
this
fact, by reducing
this
scheme they can provide additional employment as well which will make an impact on our economic growth.
Likewise
,
people
should always be independent in order to face the sudden consequences because there is no guarantee in
this
policy, they can even stop it in
future
. So for safety
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people
should always invest their money
while
earning to have a peaceful life in
future
.
To conclude
, I believe retired
people
should invest their money
while
in active working periods so that they can be independent in
future
and the
government
should financially support retired
people
for their sustaining.
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