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n the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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In recent years, the amount of workforce
have
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 been diminished to low levels because of the new technological achievement .Fortunately , the Transportation system
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 to
being
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auto- driver
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futurely
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future
 and nothing else the passengers will be inside it .
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people
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 that it is useful, others want to change
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 notion . In my point of view ,
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 believe that
advantages
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 outweigh the disadvantages . I will highlight to discuss both views below. On the one hand , having
self-drivers
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 cars
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 tremendous facilities and ease daily duties .
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 invention is to combat
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car
accident
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 because it is programmed to pursue traffic rules and keep saving
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people
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 life .
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 , the new generation became more lazy when they want to reach their selected destination.
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 study
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cambridge
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 university has
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shown that 80
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 of
people
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 fall asleep in
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 driving .
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 , it is possible to make the opposing case . Drawbacks are numerous to
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 ingenuity commencing with
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a reduction
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 in the employee number in the taxi companies ,which
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 in increasing job competition and
astonishing
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an astonishing
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 amount of
people
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 unemployed .
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 , it will have a huge impact on taking outdoor exercises and lack of human activities .
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people
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 can
used
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 their automated vehicles for purchasing
some
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food or drinks from the restaurant or supermarkets
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 of
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 calories and
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 strain to do that for themselves. In conclusion ,
,
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certainly
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 all ordinary transportation will vanish in the next decades . In my opinion , the merits overcome the demerits through a reduction in car collision , surviving
people
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 from get asleep and performing their tasks quickly and smoothly .
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