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With the recent development in technology like e-books, some people feel that the printed media like books, newspapers and magazine will soon be a thing of the past. What is your opinion?

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With the current advancements in
technology
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 like e-books, some
people
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 believe that conventional
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 as books, newspapers and magazines will be soon out of date. I would argue that
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technology
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 is becoming more and more popular, printed
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 still appears to be useful in the modern world. One of the advantages of using printed
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 is that it produces less stress on the
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 of the readers.
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 reading an e-book for a long time could make our
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 tired, paper materials affect the reader's sight lesser.
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 is because most of the
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 products contain blue lights which cause a bad effect on the
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 and could lead to near-sighted after long hours of use.
According to
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 research currently conducted by a university in London, nearly 30% of
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 have to wear glasses at a very young age
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 the overusing of
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 as computers or smartphones to read e-books and study materials. Another reason why there are always a certain number of
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 preferring to use printed
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 is that it's easier to keep track of where they are reading. By holding a book or newspaper in their hands,
people
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 find it more comfortable and convenient to follow their reading trace by running their finger along the line.
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, it's impossible to do the same with a smartphone because it's very small and sensitive which would be likely to suddenly be turned to another site because we hit the wrong button and
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 could appear to be extremely annoying. In 2018 in the USA, an interview was carried out on
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 matter and nearly 46% of
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 admit that if they are allowed to choose, they would come to the printed
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 for a similar reason. In conclusion, despite the recent development in the field of
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 like e-books, there are still individuals who would prefer to use traditional reading materials in virtue of their friendliness to the readers'
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 and their being easier to keep track of
people
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's reading pace.
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