The maps below show the changes experienced by the town of Harton at rhe beginning of the 21st Century. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary.
The maps illustrate the changes that took place in Harton City between 2008 and 20016.
It is clear that
Harton became more industrial with less woodland area over the eight years.
The most noticeable is that one of the residential areas in the south part of the city was developed into an industrial complex which was enlarged by 2016. The other residential zone and arts centre had turned into the shopping centre and multi-screen cinema in the western part of the metropolis.
Moreover
, a big lake located at the northeast of the woodland changed into a small pond. Further
developments occurred in the area of the old metropolis in the north, which was divided into two parts. One chunk was allotted to the offices and the other to the university.
The final transformation was the replacement of the derelict warehouse sector with the car park zone in the north component of the township.Submitted by hhzgx97 on
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