Some people believe that the only purpose of films is to entertain. But others say films should have educational value. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The purposes of movies have been a topic of debate for decades.

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certain individuals believe that

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are merely about entertainment, I would argue that they should include educational lessons. There are several reasons why

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have been viewed as only entertaining.

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overpopulation and scarce resources have driven humans to work harder than ever before, making them susceptible to stress and they need something like

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to relax and help them forget about work temporarily. In fact, by watching

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and being distracted for a moment, people can recover their energy and avoid burnout when they spend too much time in the performance zone.

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there are numerous

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that could attract a large number of viewers without any educational intention.

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, when it comes to horror movies, most viewers only seek thrills in scary scenes and some others merely want to test their tolerance.

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, I believe including education in

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will bring a variety of benefits. Since many people report they can easily find themselves in film characters, they would have more objective perspectives in their lives. In fact, watching a film of a rich man growing

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extremely poor conditions would motivate and propel individuals to work their best to reach their full potential.

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, environmental activists could call for action through movies.

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, a movie depicting the extinction of humans in the next fifty years

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hotter temperatures and extreme weather conditions may help improve environmental awareness among humans, leading to fewer negative impacts on the environment. In conclusion, both views appear reasonable to a certain extent. In my opinion, movie producers should include educational value in order to promote a better society and protect the planet.

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task response

The essay effectively addresses both views on the topic and provides a clear opinion.

coherence and cohesion

The essay exhibits a logical structure, with a clear introduction and conclusion.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

290 words

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