Write a letter of invitation to your parents. In the letter: – Explain that you have completed your studies – Give details of the event, including time, date and dress code – Let them know how many tickets they have and who they are for

Dear Mom and Dad, I hope you are doing well .
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am writing
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letter to invite you to my convocation.As you know that I have done my studies ,
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, the college is going to organize a graduation ceremony for us on 23 August.
This
event will be
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a different dress code
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, you have to bring formal black and white suits as it is the dress code for guests.
Although
,I completed all paperwork for
visa
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a visa
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but
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you make sure that your passport is valid for stamping and travel. I purchased two. Tickets from my college for you and
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. I can invite
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as well but he
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not have his passport yet so
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for now it is for both of you.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accomplishment
  • celebration
  • ceremony
  • decorum
  • exclusive
  • invitations
  • milestone
  • presence
  • significant
  • spirit of the occasion
  • venue
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