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You travelled abroad and faced problems at airport. Write an letter to the airport manager and provide -your flight details -what is problem -suggest some improvements you want to see

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Dear sir, I am writing
this
 letter to complain about the problem that I faced
last
 week. My name is Parth Patel, I am from Toronto, Ontario, Canada.
Last
 week, I came to New York to attend my company’s conference event. In return, I booked the Air Canada flight which was departing at 2:00 PM on June 29,2023 from New York to Toronto. I faced a lot of difficulties during the
security
 check. I already knew in advance that usually
this
 flight is always crowded and busy. So, I arrived 3 hours early at the airport. But
still
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 it took
around
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almost 2 hours for just only
security
 check. There was total
five
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of five
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security
 checking gates but only one was working from all of them. All
passengers
 were really frustrated because of that
inconvience
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inconvenience
.
Also
, the
behavior
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 of the
security
 guards was rude. They were not even answering the questions of
passengers
.
According to
 me,
airport
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 authority should take some action to resolve
this
 issue. Management should hire more
security
 guards so it would be easy for
passengers
 to finish their
security
check
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 on time.
Also
, they should teach them how to respectfully talk with the
passengers
. Hoping that the management will consider my suggestions. Yours faithfully, Parth Patel
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • flight details
  • flight number
  • arrival time
  • departure time
  • baggage claim
  • customer service
  • long queues
  • staff attitude
  • improvement suggestions
  • enhanced training
  • clear signage
  • lost luggage
  • travel experience
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