In recent years, television has contributed most to changing people’s quality of life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Despite that television conducting
changes
in many aspects of the modern world, I could partially agree with those who claim it as the one which makes the most difference to societies nowadays, Use synonyms
due to
the incremental influence of other technical devices Linking Words
such
as smartphones and computers.
It is inevitable that televisions provoke many Linking Words
changes
, including replacing the roles of newspapers, and becoming the main sources of updated information Use synonyms
due to
their efficiency and variety. Linking Words
For example
, reporters are able to present videos on TV news to make content more intriguing compared to newspapers which can only display words and photos. On top of that, it Linking Words
also
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changes
how Use synonyms
people
spent their leisure time after televisions are introduced to the publicUse synonyms
,
since audiences with different interests are able to find the programs they enjoy watching. Remove the comma
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For instance
, many sports fans are in favour of watching games with friends at home Linking Words
instead
of attending events in person.
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On the other hand
, I believe there are other technological devices that contribute more to the Linking Words
changes
in Use synonyms
people
's quality of life, Use synonyms
such
as mobile phones and computers. First of all, users of computers are able to search for information whenever they want which provides resilience in time management compared to televisions which have fixed timetables for each program. Linking Words
Secondly
, smartphones are more portable, allowing Linking Words
people
to watch footage anywhere they want, which contributes a great influence on the younger generations, fostering many producers to provide content that could be displayed on these devices to ensure better revenue.
To summarise, it is true that the invention of television fosters a dramatic change in societies, Use synonyms
however
, in my perspective, other modern technologies contributed more influence on Linking Words
people
's quality of life. Use synonyms
Therefore
, I could only partially agree with opinions as Linking Words
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