A magazine wants to include contribution from its readers for an article called 'the book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influences you most. In your letter, •describe what this book was about, •explain how this book influenced you, •say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Sir/Madam. I am writing
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missive to inform you about the article "The
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that influenced me most". I read
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whole article and it is all about how to tackle negativity in your life
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it gives many positive ideas about
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hard situations and
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help
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out you to come out from
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depression. I want to let you know that I was in
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depression
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a long time
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my work issues but my father suggest me
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book
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and I started reading
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booklet.
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, it gets me totally positive vibes. When I felt anxiety and depression, I think about
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book
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and it suddenly gives me good vibration.
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, help me out regarding
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my mental health.
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, I suggest
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book
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my
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many friends who are
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depressed
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related to their activities and want to come out
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this
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.
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, I must say
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this
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books help out
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of people in their life.
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book
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is
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a lifesavier
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lifesavier
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lifesaver
for each and every
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who have negative thoughts in their minds. I eagerly waited for
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kind of other
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from your side. Yours Sincerely, Zuben Notiyal.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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