Many people in poor countries die from diseases that are curable because they cannot afford the medication required. Do you believe that drug companies should make their products available at reduced prices in these countries?
In poor
countries
, many people
suffer from diseases that
is
easy to treat in rich Change the verb form
are
countries
. Also
, People
in poor countries
cannot afford medicines and medical treatments if they need ones
. So, some Correct pronoun usage
them
people
believe that the
drug companies should reduce Correct article usage
apply
price
for them or give them Fix the agreement mistake
prices
as
free. In my opinion, Change preposition
for
this
idea has advantages and disadvantages.
On the one hand, people
who can afford medicines but still struggle to pay may complain about the gap between poor people
and them. For example
, there are some people
who have to rent money to purchase tablets in rich countries
and they have to pay back money they cannot afford. Moreover
, it might be difficult to decide who gets discount
and who doesn't. As I mentioned, there are Correct article usage
a discount
people
who can't pay at all and can pay little. Therefore
, it would be complicated for the drug companies to choose who
to apply.
Change the pronoun
whom
On the other hand
, some people
insist that poor people
has
to get Change the verb form
have
right
treatment as everyone deserves. Add an article
the right
People
can't ignore poor people
to die
because of money so it is natural for them to get Change the verb form
dying
discount
. Fix the agreement mistake
discounts
For instance
, even though it was easy to cure, there are a lot of people
who suffer and pass away from diseases in poor country
. So, we have to help them to survive and give them Fix the agreement mistake
countries
opportunity
to live equally. Add an article
the opportunity
an opportunity
Furthermore
, this
problem solving
could help Add a hyphen
problem-solving
countries
which have a small birth rate. One of the reason
is that poor Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
countries
often have many children, however
they die young. And if rich Add a comma
,however
countries
with little birth rate
donate them Fix the agreement mistake
rates
required
medical treatment, children may help the problem of Change preposition
to required
less worker
in those Fix the agreement mistake
fewer workers
countries
in the future.
In conclusion, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In my opinion, people
should have the same opportunity and chances to live. The drug
companies have to make Correct article usage
Drug
a
right Correct article usage
the
border line
to get Correct your spelling
borderline
discount
and save Fix the agreement mistake
discounts
people
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