Some people say that the amount of noise that people make should be strictly controlled. Others say that people should be free to make as much noise as they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

While
some support the freedom for people to make noise at
anytime
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in
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anywhere,
such
as playing instruments at night time, I tend to agree with those who
in
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favour of strict regulations to ensure a quiet living environment for residents, including
forbidden
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forbidding
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people talking on the phone on public transportation.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sound pollution
  • auditory health
  • noise ordinances
  • public tranquility
  • vulnerable populations
  • excessive noise pollution
  • individual freedoms
  • personal expression
  • community life
  • public order
  • individual rights
  • designated noise zones
  • time restrictions
  • soundproofing
  • noise barriers
  • quiet hours
  • high-energy environments
  • technology and innovation
  • respectful coexistence
  • compromise
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