The map presents us a small theater in 2010, and the same theater in 2012.

The map presents us a small theater in 2010, and the same theater in 2012.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map presents us a small theater in 2010, and the same theater in 2012.
The maps illustrate the layout of a small theatre between 2010 and 2012 and show significant changes during that time period. It can be seen that the theatre received renovation efforts in the two-year time frame, with the building itself expanding sideways as existing features were moved and reconfigured. The only part that did not undergo significant changes was the central seating
area
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. Regarding the southern part of the theatre, in 2010, there was a cafe situated in the
corner
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to the right of the theatre’s main entrance,
whereas
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the left
corner
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was occupied by a ticket
office
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and an administrative
office
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.
However
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, within the next two years, the ticket
office
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was relocated to the bottom right
corner
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where the cafe had been,
while
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the administrative
office
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was moved
further
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back, to the left side of the seating
area
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.
This
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made way for a new restaurant
area
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in the left rear
corner
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. In the upper section of the maps, one notable change was that the
stage
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in front of the auditorium almost doubled in size with the addition of a side hall behind it, even as the auditorium itself remained unchanged. To the left of the
stage
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was a storage
room
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which, after 2010, was moved to the opposite end of the
stage
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to make way for the construction of a showers
area
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as well as
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the relocation of the dressing
room
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. The old dressing
room
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was located behind the
stage
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in 2010, but
this
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space,
together with
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the right side of the
stage
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, was redesigned to serve as a corridor which connected the dressing
room
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and the storage
room
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, corner, office, stage, room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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