In recent years,there has been a heated debate about whether
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and any
food
which were
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that will hurt our’s
health
form
shop
.In my view,I believe
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cannot
be allowChange the verb form
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to sell
food
,
while
food
that will only hurt our’s
health
when overcome amount should
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to sell.
On the one hand,unhealthy
food
or
beverages
will
cause
some diseases
such
as obesity and heart disease.
Therefore
,
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who have the disease will become
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.As
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result,it will
cause
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,
likewise
,strain our healthcare system,decreasing average ages,
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of crime.
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,
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health
treatment is expensive,not all
familyFix the agreement mistake
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can afford it,so they will
doingWrong verb form
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some illegal activities to make money for treatment.
Besides
that,unhealthy
food
also
leadChange the verb form
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economicChange preposition
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issue
,because unhealthy
food
commonly has lower cost and higher profit.
Consequently
,
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that which producing
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food
will face
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crisis.
On the other hand
,usually,unhealthy
food
can’t hurt our
health
,it only
establishChange the verb form
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when you eat overcome amount.
Moreover
,
removeWrong verb form
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all unhealthy
food
and
beverages
is unrealistic,over 99%
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hasChange the verb form
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added some chemical product for keeping that will hurt our
health
if eating in
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term.
,
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recent technology,we don’t have
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them because it will lead
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issueFix the agreement mistake
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aboutChange preposition
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lack of
food
.
In conclusion,
food
and
beverages
that will
cause
serious
health
problemFix the agreement mistake
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should be removed from the
shop
,
have Unnecessary verb
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a lot of
issueChange to a plural noun
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will be extended.
Otherwise
,if
food
just
causeChange the verb form
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slightlyChange the word
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health
issue
we should
allowedChange the verb form
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them
sellAdd the particle
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in the
shop
we can’t solve the
problem
that
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fromChange preposition
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removeReplace the word
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.I believe
foodCorrect article usage
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that
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will solve in the future
technology develop.