Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

It is controversial whether the increasing similarities among

countries

are caused by enabling

people

to buy similar

products

from anywhere in the world. I consider that

this

development is more positive than negative. There is no doubt that some detrimental aspects come with the increasing similarities

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countries

.

This

trend will

undeinably

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undeniably

result in the disappearance of some traditional cultures. That's because,

people

tend to buy the same

products

due to

the

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globalisation, resulting in the lack of variation between different regions.

Thus

, local

products

which have unique characteristics and carry the local

culure

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culture

start to disappear. ,

Consequently

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the culture itself with a lack of supportive methods will gradually diminish, and without the lack of

this

united force,

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eventually local

people

will start to lose the sense of belonging and

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cultural pride. Specifically,

this

could happen as local clothes are replaced by

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popular and stylish modern clothing, and

then

the related ceremonies which involve those traditional wearings will

then

disappear, resulting in the fade away of culture.

However

, there are a lot of positive effects

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from the fact that

countries

are becoming similar.

To begin

with, the living

quality

arises from

this

phenomenon. Since it is effortless to buy the same product worldwide,

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highly developed production and transportation

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essential,

then

in order to build the supply chain, it is necessary to complete the production and transportation globalisation process. Considering that the additional costs arise from different standards, they will be unified in

this

process, leading to

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unified

quality

and customers from all over the world will enjoy an equalised service,

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eventually resulting in a rise in living

quality

Moreover

,

this

process

also

lead

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to the self-development of those undeveloped

countries

. Since the

people

there are able to have access to the

products

in high

quality

, it is

also

very convenient for local scientists to understand the gap between the top-tier and local developments,

then

it is possible to learn from the

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products

and eventually give a boost to local industries.

For example

, the imported fire plants are highly-efficient and if scholars can analyse them and try to produce reverse-engineered

products

, it will definitely contribute to their own industries.

To conclude

, I believe that it is better for

countries

to become similar in providing

products

, which help

people

to buy everything anywhere, and contribute to not only individuals but

also

to the country itself.