Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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It is controversial whether the increasing similarities among
countries
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are caused by enabling
people
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to buy similar
products
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from anywhere in the world. I consider that
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development is more positive than negative. There is no doubt that some detrimental aspects come with the increasing similarities
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countries
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.
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trend will
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result in the disappearance of some traditional cultures. That's because,
people
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tend to buy the same
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globalisation, resulting in the lack of variation between different regions.
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, local
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which have unique characteristics and carry the local
culure
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culture
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the culture itself with a lack of supportive methods will gradually diminish, and without the lack of
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united force,
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eventually local
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will start to lose the sense of belonging and
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cultural pride. Specifically,
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could happen as local clothes are replaced by
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popular and stylish modern clothing, and
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the related ceremonies which involve those traditional wearings will
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disappear, resulting in the fade away of culture.
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, there are a lot of positive effects
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from the fact that
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are becoming similar.
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with, the living
quality
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arises from
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phenomenon. Since it is effortless to buy the same product worldwide,
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highly developed production and transportation
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essential,
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in order to build the supply chain, it is necessary to complete the production and transportation globalisation process. Considering that the additional costs arise from different standards, they will be unified in
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process, leading to
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unified
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and customers from all over the world will enjoy an equalised service,
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eventually resulting in a rise in living
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,
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process
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lead
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to the self-development of those undeveloped
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. Since the
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there are able to have access to the
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in high
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, it is
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very convenient for local scientists to understand the gap between the top-tier and local developments,
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it is possible to learn from the
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products
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and eventually give a boost to local industries.
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, the imported fire plants are highly-efficient and if scholars can analyse them and try to produce reverse-engineered
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, it will definitely contribute to their own industries.
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, I believe that it is better for
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to become similar in providing
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, which help
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to buy everything anywhere, and contribute to not only individuals but
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to the country itself.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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