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Some people agree with spending lot of mpney on large wedding while others thinks it is a waste of money. What is your opinion?

#people #mpney #waste #money
Spending lots of
money
 on
weddings
 has both sides. Many public thinks that less
money
 should be spent on
weddings
 but on their
hand
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 some even think that more and more
money
 should be spent on that.
According to
me
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my
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 as a wedding function is the most important function in life so
money
 should spend but, it should have
also
 a limit on it. If
people
 will spend more
money
then
 more stuff will be needed and as more staff will be
also
 needed and from that more and more
people
 will get employment, as
people
 will get employment
then
 it will be benefited
to
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the nation
also
 as
people
 are getting more
money
. As
people
 will spend their
money
 on
weddings
 they will be highlighted on social media which will create popularity for them. More
money
 is spent by social media
people
, big businessmen, vloggers, bloggers, politicians, and many more. As
people
 are spending
money
 on
weddings
 if that
money
 they will give to poor
people
than
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 it
wil
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will
 be so much helpful to them. Rather than spending
money
 on function community can
also
 make FD, can
also
 use it for future education, and can
also
 do charity from it.
People
 who spent less
money
 on the wedding and use that
money
 on education or give it to another person for education is very much helpful to the person
as well as
 the nation. So if a person spent large
money
 on a wedding is good but if
people
is
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are
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 using that
money
 for the future is
also
 good. There should be
limit
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a limit
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 set on spending
money
 on
weddings
 which will help
people
.
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