Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that in today's world subjects like Science and technology are more important than History. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

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A number of people believe that
history
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is
the
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vital
subject
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in
curriculum
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.
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,
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other people
indicates
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that
with
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todays
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world
that
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apply
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subjects
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like
science
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and
technology
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are more critical than
history
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. Both of these viewpoints will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached. On the one hand ,
history
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is saying as an important
subject
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by
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many people.
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, the learning of
history
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could bring some benefits.
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,
adolescent
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adolescents
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will get to know about
ancestors
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their ancestors
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and their livelihood.
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, youth learn about past
nation
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nations
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,
how
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and how
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they have lived and
brought
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were brought
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up.
However
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, by getting
know
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they know how to live their life perfectly. To
illustrates
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illustrate
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,
to encounter
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future
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problems can be reduced by getting
know
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the
history
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.
On the other hand
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,
subjects
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like
science
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and
technology
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are
vital
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more vital
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than other
subjects
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.
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, learning about
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and
medical related
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subjects
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will be useful in
future
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. Unlike in the past , new
dieseces
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diseases
are being created
everyday
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.
In addition
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, to adopt these we should give
importance
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to
science
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subject
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. On top of that ,
technology
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has been
a
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essential
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, as
enhancement
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the enhancement
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of
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future
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is growing.
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, folks are giving
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for
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technology
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is
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to encounter
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circumstances.
That is
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to say , nowadays ,
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and
technology
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subject
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subjects
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should be given
importance
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in
curriculum
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is vital. To summarize ,
although
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history
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taught the past ancestor’s evolution
but
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the advancement of
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future
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the future
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is growing , I strongly agree with
this
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notion , giving
importance
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to
science
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and
technology
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is
vital
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more vital
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,
than
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then
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giving
importance
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to
History
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.
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