the charts below show information about three different deserts around the world.

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The charts illustrate different information about three

deserts

in Africa, Asia and North America. The one which is located in Africa, called

Sahara

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the Sahara

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desert, is the biggest and

also

has

maximom

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maximum

annual rainfall compared to others.

Besides

Taklimakan

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the Taklimakan

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desert in Asia has the most freezing winter with -9c.

Moreover

, the lowest recorded might be -26.1c which is the coldest weather that these

deserts

can be experienced. Great

Basin

desert in North America has

been

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apply

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experienced the same temperature in summer which is scorching summer for these environments.

In addition

, temperature extremes in Sahara and Great

Basin

are very close.

Furthermore

, the highest recorded in these two

deserts

is near 58c. As you see, Great

Basin

has 31.600 sq km less than Taklimakan but they have similarities in average temperature.

Overall

, these three

deserts

, Sahara, Taklimakan and Great

Basin

have some similarities and differences.

For example

, they

located

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are located

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in different parts of the world with different sizes but they have

same

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the same

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temperatures during the year.

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the charts below show information about three different deserts around the world.

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Some people think that university students should specialize in one subject, while others think universities should encourage students to learn a range of subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people say that protecting the environment is the government responsibility. Other belive that every individual should be responsible for it. Discuss both view and give your own opinions.

Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?